This is kind of like taking a hard look at my WiP when my characters start wandering all over the place doing stuff I didn't originally work into the story. Side trips may work out well some of the time, but in most instances our stories gel better if we keep our characters on the straight and narrow. I've had some painful editing time trying to work out what to keep and what to slash because my characters went on unplanned adventures. How do you rein your characters in from side trips?
As you can see, it's not pretty to look at, however, it is sweeter than your average grapefruit. First found in the wild, the ugli fruit has gone commercial and it is bred and bottled for commercial consumption.
|Ugli Fruit - Peeled & Pegged|